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‘Rectify’: A Side Trip From the Side Trip to ‘The Source’

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Photos courtesy of Sundance.tv.  ‘Rectify’ “The Source”.

 “‘My son,’ the father said, ‘you are always with me, and everything I have is yours.  But we had to celebrate and be glad, because this brother of yours was dead and is alive again; he was lost and is found.’”

The Parable of the Lost Son – Luke 15:11-32

Mothers and sons. Fathers and daughters. For me, this has been the summer of parental relationships. ‘Fun Home’ has been on my brain, with the lives of cartoonist Alison Bechdel and her father Bruce swimming in song. Now, it’s ‘Recitfy’, with its emotional twists and character upheaval, I find the lovely pearl that is the mom and son chemistry between Janet and Daniel, so gorgeously defined in the final episode of season three entitled “The Source”.

I’m not a religious or biblical person, but when watching (or reading) a story unfold about human conflict, I admire the use of age-old archetypes and subtext from the bible peppered throughout the telling. ‘Rectify’ has something holy about it. The steady, prayerful pace is sometimes interrupted by outbursts of human anguish and hateful behavior that stirs heartache or disgust.

It’s visual poetry, sacred in the telling, poetic like scripture.

Daniel Holden, the wayward son in this tale, is a convicted murderer released back to his hometown of Paulie, Georgia after twenty years on death row. His presence in the land of the living is like a bull in a china shop. He knocks over emotions, crashes plate glass feelings, holds up a shard of broken mirror to the faces of those who see a bit of themselves in him. Marriages fail. Relationships break up. They blame Daniel. But Daniel is only the catalyst to the underbelly of problems his family and the townspeople never wanted to face. Problems caused by bias, faith, dependency, cover-ups, stories told through the filter of gossip – lies.  Through it all is Janet,  whose son Daniel is cut directly from the same worn cloth.

Daniel’s homecoming is like the Prodigal Son, a story I conjured in the last blog post about ‘Rectify’.  When mocked by the Pharisees for sitting and eating with sinners, Jesus tells them a series of stories, the last of them being the tale of the Prodigal Son, who left town with an early inheritance, only to squander it all on foolish things. After a period of famine and destitution, he returns home humbled. His father celebrates his return by killing a fatted calf and fetching for the best robe for his attire. His older son, who has been loyal and tended to his father’s needs, is angry. How could he treat this wayward son better than he after all he’s done?  The father in essence says lets be glad. He was lost and now he is found. Let’s treasure the person we’ve been given. He’s a gift. Life…is a gift.

Let’s apply this to mother Janet. As her stepson Teddy Jr. stirs in bitterness for the return of this ghostly brother. In fact, in the wake of Daniel’s return, Teddy’s bitterness and suspicion over his wife’s attention to her lost brother-in-law, compounded by a violent act of control bestowed upon him by Daniel – he has become undone. He loses everything.

And Janet is there is help Teddy Jr.. She placates her stepson. Apologizes for not being there for him as usual, a stepmother who raised a son my marriage, whose own mother left him and his father for the world.

Daniel is her blood.  They have a deeper connection that goes beyond kin. It’s ripe with philosophy and literature.They speak their own special language. One can only wonder the beauty they shared when he was a little boy – swapping simple observations and reading stories by Harper and O’Connor or poignant morality tales for children they understood in depth.

Rectify the source2Creator Ray McKinnon is an inspiration to all writers.  In ‘Rectify’ he’s created simple and complicated relationships between brother and sister – father and son, the law and government officials. He pulls apart the intricacies of cold cases, revenge, violence, angels and unconscionable devils with delicacy.

In the final episode of season three, McKinnon brings Daniel to the ocean with his mother. A side trip from the side trip to ‘The Source’ – the ocean where Daniel is baptized and washed of the past – ready to begin anew.

And his mother brings him to the next chapter, waves goodbye, and begins the wait for her son to come back home again.

Amen, brother McKinnon. Amen.


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The Prodigal Son Returns: ‘Rectify’


Aden Young in ‘Rectify’.

I am intoxicated by ‘Rectify’, the Sundance Channel’s original series (also streaming on Netflix).  I am dumbfounded, slightly dazed and catatonic from the spell it has me under. Why did it take me so long to watch this remarkable drama?

Hauntingly portrayed by Aden Young, Daniel Holden is the center of this story. Sprung from prison after spending almost 20 years on death row, he returns to a family that has moved on, a world that has changed, and a town that will never forget the murder and rape of a young girl for which he was convicted.

Also in the mix is his sister Amantha, who was twelve years old when her brother went to prison and spent her entire adulthood fighting to get him out. (Amantha is played with force and conviction by the stunning Abigail Spencer.)

The plight of Daniel is biblical, mythological and ingrained with spiritual philosophy. His given name “Daniel” is not an accident. Translated from Hebrew, Daniel means “God will be my judge.” In viewing him walk through a reign of stones cast his way, one imagines the sins of others exposed and swirling around Daniel’s turbulent yet seemingly calm orbit. He’s the Prodigal Son returning home to those who want him locked back up – especially a jealous step-brother who has lost everything (his wife, his business, his big brother status, his dignity) since Daniel came home.

There is so much more to this show I’d rather not get into since it could hinge on spoiler territory. There is still an investigation of his innocence conducted by an ambitious and sleazy state senator that may put him back in prison, plus a host of other complications caused by those involved with the case. Besides, I still have season three, which just ended last week, to get through.

Ray McKinnon is the creator of this remarkable work. This unique storytelling is food for the writer and actor. This morning, I researched some press behind the show, and came upon this terrific quote, so in tune with my own personal writing project – my own story burning a hole in my pocket.

When asked how he was able to sell a slow moving, somber show to a network, McKinnon replied:

“… usually if a person has a hunger or desire to tell a story, that also means that they have a desire to see a story like that. You have to think that you’re not the only person in the world that is thinking that way, and if you are, then you’re really in a lot of trouble. So other people were attracted to it and had a hunger for this kind of storytelling, and it’s certainly not a lot of people, but I’m gratified for the ones that do have hunger for it.

The music selected for “Rectify” is also gorgeous. Bon Iver’s ‘Flume’ and Mazzy Star’s “Into Dust” float by along with so many others. Cracker’s “Low” brought me back to some old memories. They all hit you in the gut.

Yet, the quote above is music to my writer’s heart. I’m going to live in this quote for a while.